[Note] Diary SAC 19/20 marks

ATAR Notes

State: VIC
Uploaded By: sarangiya

Corrected with teacher's corrections, none of my own. The topic is written at the beginning of the document. There is no furigana. I got 95% or 19 of 20 marks.
Teacher's overall note:
&quot;I think your diary was highly successful, particularly &amp;#39135;&amp;#12409;&amp;#12394;&amp;#12364;&amp;#12425;&amp;#12397;&amp;#12399;&amp;#12376;&amp;#12417;&amp;#12383;&amp;#12511;&amp;#12540;&amp;#12531; was excellent. You used the grammar naturally. &amp;#19978;&amp;#25163;&amp;#12395;&amp;#26360;&amp;#12369;&amp;#12414;&amp;#12375;&amp;#12383;&amp;#12397;&amp;#12290;&amp;#12362;&amp;#12417;&amp;#12391;&amp;#12392;&amp;#12358;&amp;#12290;&quot;
On the actual genkouyoushi:
&quot;&amp;#12513;&amp;#12481;&amp;#12515;&amp;#12513;&amp;#12481;&amp;#12515;&amp;#12362;&amp;#12418;&amp;#12375;&amp;#12429;&amp;#12356;!&quot;
&quot;Excellent (double underline)&quot;

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