Hi! I graduated from a private school with an ATAR of 99.70 (current Juris Doctor (Law) student at the University of Melbourne, Dean's honours list x2) and received raw scores of 48 in English and 45 in French. I am selling all my Language Analysis notes for English, and all my French notes. Please email me at angievceresources@gmail.com if interested in these resources!
Rest assured these are very detailed notes - I recently heard back from a student who bought them last year and attained 99.95. Over a hundred happy buyers and counting, with many students with my notes having achieved ATARs in the high 99s up to 99.95.
The notes I am selling were instrumental to my success. VCE Languages are not only about foundations, but also memorisation/strategy, hence the use of the oral scripts, phrase books, idiom lists, and essay sentence starters. As for VCE English, my resources were instrumental to helping me achieve my score, and I want them to supplement your learning and help you achieve the scores you deserve. They are extremely comprehensive and are literally the product of months of hard work and perfecting, with a fair few hours spent crying in front of the computer, trying to word an intricate idea in a novel way, and searching for the most precise and sophisticated comparison - which I definitely have in these final notes.
My SAC essays were very similar to my practice essays, and most of them were worse than the quality of my practice essays yet managed to get me almost full marks from a school that got 6 50s in English, which gives you an idea of the standard. My teachers, who are VCAA examiners, also stated that my notes (including key paragraphs, sentence starters from a stack of readings and resources, character profiles, word bank, quote bank, essay plans) were the most detailed and sophisticated they had ever seen, and were enough to give even the worst English student a 50, provided they put the work in. Buying these notes/essays/books would save you the HUGE amount of time I spent writing them needed to strengthen your understanding of the texts, and would essentially give you the key to a perfect 50.
The price is just $40 for everything in English, and $40 for everything in French, with over hundreds of hours of hard work's value and thousands of dollars of professional tutoring's value to formulate and refine these notes.
Description of all English Section C Language Analysis resources: $40 for all
My 40/40 language analysis SAC
All my 17 lang analysis essays marked 10/10 by 2 examiners (all are typed and not handwritten, making them easier to read) + 25 typed Premier's award winner essays
Miscellaneous notes on Language Analysis techniques to writing a 10/10 essay - hundreds of pages, including exhaustive table of techniques and appeals - unique, specific and sophisticated phrases to describe effect, more sentence starters, 'the sparkle effect' (phrases and techniques that make your essay stand out as 10/10), exam revision and structure/strategy notes
Language analysis phrase bank 25 pages (full of hundreds of phrases which I had up my sleeve, speeding up and elevating the sophistication of my essay writing significantly)
Script for persuasive oral and statement of explanation, which received 40/40 (also rehearsed with English examiner who said he would give it full marks) - Ice use in Australia
Persuasive oral and statement of explanation on whether the child welfare system should be overhauled, which received 40/40
Description of each French resource: $40 for all
11 essays marked 15/15 by examiner, AND 12 essay sentence starters for 12 VCE core themes (I essentially wrote out phrases/sentences/some full paras for 3 paragraphs for each main VCE theme (eg: technology, health), so that in the exam, I could mould/reword what I'd memorised to fit the topic at hand)
Oral exam General conversation script - This is probably worth thousands of dollars from the time spent writing it/spent with a tutor correcting/refining it, and adding more idioms/expressions/grammatical techniques. I began preparing this at the start of Yr 11 and finished mid-Yr12, when I began memorising the phrases/ideas for each possible gen convo question. I was prepared for every question I received whilst also seeming spontaneous, leading to 99/100 on the oral exam. The document is 35,000 words and 94 pages. At the start there is a glossary with topics (hobbies, school, etc.) and subtopics to help organise your revision.
Oral exam Detailed study script - Couldn't have gotten 99/100 in the oral/full marks on both detailed study SACs without this. My topic was 'le mouvement des initiatives positives' and it is a fantastic, rich topic that the examiners clearly loved and perked up for. If you can choose your own topic, choosing this one and buying my script would be clever.
Essay topics - 30 topics organised under VCE THEME/written by an examiner. I found doing 1 essay for each topic-like environment, technology-was enough to prepare me for any topic at the end of the year. I hence got 15/15 on my final essay.
100 idioms, organised under gen convo topic, for oral exam and essays - Idioms are how a top VCE language student stands out from a good one. They add authenticity to every assessment, especially orals. My LOTE teachers called me 'the idiom queen' largely due to this comprehensive document, in which I have amassed idioms encountered from Yrs 9-12.
Linking phrase doc: Invaluable vocab doc that increased my writing and speaking fluency dramatically. Has synonyms of common words like however/furthermore, top 20 subjunctive phrases, and structural phrases to elevate the sophistication of essays, like 'Il est grand temps que nous prenions les choses en main une bonne fois pour toutes, avant qu'il ne soit trop tard!'
Text types - I made a fullproof structure with intro/conclusion for all text types, which I memorised to give me a comprehensive formula for 15/15 essays each time
10 mock oral exams - 10 sets of 7-8 gen convo questions each, which are great for doing mock orals by yourself (in each of the 10 groups, there is a set of questions that could all be posed in the 7-minute oral exam time)
Oral exam and SAC phrases - great fillers/phrases to buy thinking time - this was incredibly helpful for my actual oral and the examiners seemed very impressed when I said these phrases!
Prep doc for roleplay SAC (We didn't get the topic beforehand so these phrases/paragraphs are great for any topic) - this was my holy grail in getting full marks for the roleplay SAC!!