Here is my written response, but I don't have my test results as they only sent an offer email.
WRITTEN RESPONSE:
Creative, confident and passionate, these are the similarities I believe I share with Suzanne Cory High School. To me, school is not always about the marks, but more of an opportunity given to those who want to explore who they want to be. Resources, environment, and student results are all essential pieces for any reputable school, but Suzanne Cory is beyond that.
Connections are what make the world go around, and they are essential in propelling anyone's career forward. Suzanne Cory High School nurtures the best of our society, from doctors, engineers, lawyers and other careers. Having the opportunity to network with these future leaders and changemakers at an early stage of my life during school can sustain my career in the future. I want to have friends that will positively impact me, and I want to be a friend that they can rely on. I want to benefit the school, and to have the ability to collaborate with like minded people in our thirst for knowledge and challenge ourselves in Suzanne Cory High School.
I’ve learnt to persevere through hardships, teaching me the value of patience, gratitude and acceptance. When I fractured my wrist in April it had crushed so much of the year I was looking forward too. This one injury stole the majority of my soccer season, initially making me think I was useless to my team. Although I could not participate on the field, I still wanted to do the best with the situation in front of me, as I always want to help in any way. To do this, I was coming to my teammates' games and cheering them on, analyzing the game's movements online, and being in other roles like a linesman for friendlies or ball boy. I want to reflect this cooperation and passion of mine onto the grounds of Suzanne Cory High School, in the form of sports and extracurriculars, supporting my peers, and team building.
Beyond academic prowess I had through my Top Achiever or Excellence awards, I would additionally love to apply my talents and interest onto the grounds of Suzanne Cory High School. Although I have never grasped an instrument to learn or made a painting that rivals Picasso, I still believe that finding my own artistic self is essential to me. Seeing that Suzanne Cory High School incentivises its students in the Arts, it makes me wonder about the things I could become that I may not have considered otherwise.
I want to immerse myself in a community of students and teachers that think to change the world as we see it today. I want to create long-lasting friendships, discovering new parts about me, and contributing myself to the school with my academics and charm. As an affordable, close, and facilitated school, I, [My name], would be honored to join Suzanne Cory High School.
Don't make fun if it pls, although its not the best.
