Hi guys, second time writing a complete argument analysis essay. I'm in year 10 and I'm just wondering if anyone is willing to help me out and provide some feedback?
Here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mPn99LKlzlEaeF13t0j3V0RozjdUfAR2rCtVdDn6CQw/edit?usp=sharing
P.S - Should I add a conclusion?