iza here ya go for u to use and give chatgpt to mark, say dont sugarcoat and glaze and it wil give u an honest score as i got a 21/20 for no fricken reason 1. Ideas & Content (4 marks)
4 – Highly original, engaging concept; strong development of events; maintains relevance and focus throughout.
3 – Interesting idea with solid development; mostly relevant and focused with minor lapses.
2 – Basic or predictable idea; uneven development; may stray from focus at times.
1 – Underdeveloped or confusing idea; lacks clarity or purpose.
0 – No meaningful ideas presented.
- Organization & Structure (4 marks)
4 – Clear and purposeful structure; strong orientation, complication, climax, and resolution; excellent pacing and transitions.
3 – Logical structure; good use of paragraphs; clear beginning, middle, and end; minor pacing or transition issues.
2 – Some structure; ideas may feel rushed or jumbled; weak transitions.
1 – Poor or unclear structure; lacks coherence.
0 – No organizational structure evident.
- Voice & Audience Engagement (4 marks)
4 – Compelling voice; evokes emotion or interest; matches purpose and tone consistently.
3 – Distinct voice present; generally engaging and appropriate.
2 – Limited voice; not particularly engaging; inconsistent tone.
1 – Flat or confusing voice; little audience awareness.
0 – No voice evident.
- Word Choice & Language Techniques (4 marks)
4 – Excellent vocabulary; precise, vivid language; strong use of figurative language or literary devices.
3 – Good vocabulary; some descriptive or figurative language.
2 – Basic or repetitive vocabulary; little attempt at descriptive writing.
1 – Poor or incorrect word choices; weak or awkward phrasing.
0 – Very limited vocabulary; unclear or inappropriate language.
- Conventions (Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation) (4 marks)
4 – Near-perfect grammar, punctuation, and spelling; minor or no errors.
3 – Few errors; mostly accurate mechanics that don’t disrupt reading.
2 – Some errors that occasionally disrupt meaning.
1 – Frequent errors that hinder understanding.
0 – Persistent errors; writing difficult to understand.
