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Make a very detailed list of all the topics and subtopics you need to cover, divide the list up into the days you have to studying making sure to include a mix of subjects in each day so it's easier to keep your attention then each day at the start of the day plan out when you are doing which topic depending how your brain works you can schedule one or two long breaks in the day or many short breaks. It's also helpful to ask classmates for any good resources they use for revision as the best way to study efficiently when you don't have much time is super good resources. Good luck!

It is a little hard to judge out of context but often when analysing something in English one of the criteria is cultural attitudes, assumptions, and beliefs I think it would help if you were to research a bit of background about when whatever this piece was made and a bit about the author and overall background, that way you can reference it throughout and really drive the main point of whatever the piece your analysing is I see you've done it at the start but I think it could be done a little more and a little better. The first sentence for example could be extended and improved on, you've sort of got the idea but cut it short just before you've made a concise yet detailed point. Your sentence structure could be improved on as the paragraph doesn't seem to flow nicely (part of this is because I have no context for the paragraph) it sort of seems like really individual sentences that have quite apparent starts and stops instead of one flowy paragraph that just goes on. You used the names a lot this may be difficult to cut down if you look at it sentence to sentence as it may be confusing if you just replace it with he however I think if you look at the paragraph as a whole you could restructure the sentencing which would help the paragraph flow more but also cut down on the repetitiveness. It also seems like your analysis is a bit surface level once again it's hard to tell without context but the way it is worded seems like you have these big broad concepts to analyse but you've only really scratched the surface level. Overall, you've got a really good base and with a little more effort on how you word it and put it together and a deeper level of analysis I think it would be fantastic. As for what grade level it is tough to say honestly especially since it also depends the grade but I think about a grade 8 B level. I'm in year 11 currently and I love giving feedback on assignments so if you need any in the future I'd be happy to help

I'm in year 11 psychology currently and as someone who enjoys psychology theory it is quite boring, it covers a heap of topics that like you mentioned all need to be memorised which makes it difficult it and it also scales down, I would suggest food studies however, before you decide I would suggest looking at the syllabus for each subject so you know exactly what you will be studying and can then make a fully informed decision.

I need to do some hard core revision what are anyone's favourite websites/channels/resources any and all recommendations would be greatly appreciated for pretty much any area of the syllabus