Victorian selective school

mhs-grinder

Ronaldo ye i do need to work on the flow sometimes thats what my tutor also tells me, any tips on how to approach that?

Ronaldo

mhs-grinder i would say its a superior and for flow write out a bunch of them and use synonyms of hard words u know so for example for meticulous use precise and for juxtaposition use comparison or proximity bc they dont give u the best marks on using big words they give it to good vocab but great flow for example do smth like "such a task would require hours of precise training" or "while there is a comparison between reading being a hobby attained by children" and dnt worry abt getting aa while it is a good mindset meaning aiming high gets u to achieve high

mhs-grinder

appreciate the feedback, thx man!

Ronaldo

mhs-grinder np good luck on the exam inshallah we make it in

mhs-grinder

Ronaldo u too

mhs-grinder

but i still know that I wont get in since my maths is not so good and my school has lots of competition... 🙁

MMHS

mhs-grinder
do you do james an or any tutoring, if so what do you average.

MMHS

mhs-grinder
i think its about a 7-8 out of 10, overall pretty good, I'm guessing you wrote this on paper then transferred it to computer? The rebuttal needs to be a bit stronger because i don't think reading effects how people fit in society. Also rebuttal isn't complete. If all this vocabulary just came to you in the heat of the moment then that's pretty good but make sure to use the correct vocab for the sentence as sometimes going overboard isn't as good as saying something of slightly less calibre but it still conveys the message a bit better (if that makes sense). Overall vocab is probably your strongest point if they all came to you in the moment, otherwise its a good piece. Also the topic is funny idk why just like "What is reading", but overall I'd say if this was in a selective school test then probably above bc some things can be improved like the rebuttal otherwise yea.

mhs-grinder

MMHS topic was that reading is a good hobby for kids to adopt, wanted to have a catchy intro thats why I added that. Overall, thank you for your feedback.
P.S. I wrote this on laptop but it was timed with ni extra editing programs, the writing was done in supervised test conditions.

mhs-grinder

i used to go james an for 2 ters but quit bc i felt it was more coaching and not teaching, i do a english tuition by the name of, Mr Shaam who has helped many students get in. But ive only done one term. Usually I average 18-18.5/20 in writings there.

MMHS

mhs-grinder
oh nice, me too around about, what about for maths and english scores?

MMHS

mhs-grinder how did u used to go with scores for james?

Ronaldo

mhs-grinder well i reckon what @MMHS is saying coincides with what i said but a little more depth also when u thought u got it was an aa y did u think that also this is off topic but could u pls tell me wat u think u will get in terms of scores and preferences

mhs-grinder

Ronaldo sryy i could not get u there could u pls reiterate

MMHS

Guys, with only 6 days left till the test, many will be needing a beacon of hope in the form of seeing other peoples success stories, I suggest heading over to this discussion and scrolling to the top!:https://discussion.atarnotes.com/d/7396-2022-victorian-selective-entry-test-results/336

Ronaldo

MMHS thx man and the feeling and emotions of those people receiveng pd and offers is so cool

MMHS

ikr like even rn i have butterflies in my stomach bc I keep imagining the day I hopefully get in, that will be the best dy on my life. Everyone sharing their jubilance on the discussion is so great, people getting in schs,nossal,mhs and macrob its just such a wholistic feeling

Ronaldo

MMHS fr tho if i got into any of these schools the feeling of that blazer and the cold breeze of entering the train like arnav kadian super early and entering knowing that you have achieved academic greatness is just a massive accomplishment

Ronaldo

mhs-grinder pd is a principals discretion and i was saying that the feeling of receiving an offer from a school is just amazing

mhs-grinder

oh no i was talking ab when u said this to my comment: well i reckon what @MMHS is saying coincides with what i said but a little more depth also when u thought u got it was an aa y did u think that also this is off topic but could u pls tell me wat u think u will get in terms of scores and preferences

Ronaldo

mhs-grinder oh so i meant what scores do u reckon u will get and what ur school preferences are and i meant y did u think ur piece was aa y not superior or average.

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