eansh get ur ass on discord

Also, could someone rate my persuasive piece just did (i promise i didn't use ai except for the prompt and stimuli) It can appear a bit rushed and incoherent in places, and the bolded bit is what i did after 20 min or edited after that

SHOULD WE INSTALL A UNIVERSAL HEALTHCARE SYSTEM?

With a rapidly rising global population predicted to grow to 9 billion in just 2025, it is imperative for us to realise the benefits of installing a universal healthcare system. Doing so would enable us to develop a stronger global connectivity and would also provide us with several economic benefits.

First and foremost, installing a universal healthcare system would allow us to develop a stronger global connectivity. In countries where access to healthcare facilities is difficult, striving for a universal healthcare system would not only enable us to realise the problems and hardships many families in need face but also help them to feel more elevated and considered. This would prevent larger conundrums such as war, colonisation or exploitation in these countries in the long term, as they'd have our support and empathy already. Therefore, we must install a universal healthcare system.

Secondly, it would provide us with greater economic benefits. With a healthier global workforce, those less fortunate would be able to thrive without getting constantly worried by health problems. That behooves us to think and act for the greater good of humanity, for as corruption and inflation rises in many of the developed and developing countries, we can still bring in peace and stability with a healthier and thriving workforce.

My opponent would argue that we are already thriving as we are, and there are "more important things to invest our money in. However, if that were to be the case, why are so many people in the tropical regions dying of malaria, just because they couldn't access healthcare? How many people don't stand a chance of living just because they couldn't access cancer care? How do you think the masses of poor are able to make ends meet, just because many of them are too sick too work and can't afford healthcare, forcing their children into slavery and exploitation? To combat this, we must install a universal healthcare system.

In conclusion, it is imperative to install a universal healthcare system for stronger global connectivity paired with economic benefits it can allow us. Let us strive for a world that thrives, with each individual being able to live a life, free of the worry of not being able to combat all the healthcare problems they can face.

    Skyward1264 7/10, bit short for 20,, maybe longer points and avoid saying 'my opponent' as it doesn't generalize all non-believers, just one person which is uneffective.

        Rate MHS GRINDER essay

        Many individuals know the saying, ‘You only live once’. This saying has gained popularity among youngsters as a symbol of freedom. It is said that this ‘motto’ conveys a message that you have
        one life so enjoy it to the fullest. Additionally, there is another profound and accurate statement by Charles Simmons. He expresses, ‘Live only for today and ruin your tomorrow’. This
        statement, although laconic, applies to the life of humans. We sapiens are built to endure. This philosophy of ‘living today’ is futile. Instead, discipline should be embraced for a better future, as
        liberty and living without restraint can jeopardise it. Furthermore, this text explores the cornerstone of hard work and determination for a better future and why ‘living today’ is detrimental to
        society. Hence the innate quote stated by Charles Simmons is authoritative.

        Firstly, living today means having fun and enjoying life. While possessing valid traits, this assertion is entirely inaccurate. Living today can impact your body and society in a plethora of ways. This
        is through impacts on mental health, carelessness, rigid behaviour, and lack of knowledge. Instead, to avoid daunting obstacles, individuals should refer to the correct path of working hard with
        full determination to achieve goals. This can inevitably lead to an ameliorated future with zero struggles and stresses in life.

        Moreover, for eons, humans have been distracted from their goals. This is due to the vice of ‘living today’ presented in society. It is a detrimental and mendacious persona that can shatter
        human careers and goals. Due to the inevitable issue of humans' wavering minds, enjoying life to the fullest has been the epitome of a distraction. Once embedded in the human psyche, it can
        derail even the most resolute individuals.

        To rebut, although hard work and determination have abundant positive qualities, some may argue on the benefits of ‘living today’. Living today can provide a feeling of elation in the human
        body. This joyfulness can evoke cherished memories to be treasured in the future. Moreover, it can further improve mental health by flushing out negative stresses and anxiety. This is because
        hard work can generate numerous problems and conflicts that may adversely affect individuals' mental health. Conversely, 'living for today' can alleviate such burdens.

        In conclusion, ‘living today’ or enjoying life to the fullest is detrimental and mendacious in society. Instead, the innate philosophy by Charles Simmons should be adopted by many. This quote
        states, ‘‘Live only for today and ruin your tomorrow’. This is because enjoying life can lead to a rotted and ruined future. On the other hand, determination and hard work can make you strive
        for a better future leading to ‘null stress’. Therefore, based on the aforementioned reasons, 'living for today' proves to be a detrimental vice. The quote by Charles Simmons should be embraced
        by many as a guiding principle to strive for a better future.

          Skyward1264 Ok right off the bat your intro is good but you are missing something.
          Sign-posting (aka listing your arguements). In your intro it basically is required for you to get full marks.

          E.g: Cats are better than dogs, 3 arguements
          Cats are better than dogs as they can take care of them selves, instead of having to constantly take care of dogs. Cats also need less attention, which can benifit you when you are busily doing something, and cats are better than dogs, as (etc)