changi @mhs-grinder someone rated ur shaam story 8.5/10, very good length and good vocab. The intro is a bit long tho.
mhs-grinder changi i would post ur essay @changi but the problem is i cant find it on the pptx, is it rlly that bad?!?!
mhs-grinder changi ye but like mine made th pptx wheres urs, can u sned me one of ur essay illl rate it priv on discord so uk we could both improve rn