PotatoSinghThe3rd MMHS Don't worry, I messed up too. I'm not sure whether I put exasperated or not.. I put disappointed... i think. Look, i was IN A HURRY. I can't wait for my results though
MMHS Ronaldo no but she was expressing concern saying that people do get mistakes, but not for that type of question
tuliplover PotatoSinghThe3rd for me I wrote about this girl who is a cleaner in the cinema and she heard sounds and what not then she found a child and called the police but it was all in her head
clover tuliplover really good story! i just think maybe at the end try not to put a cliffhanger/ "its a dream" sort of thing because my teachers always tell me not to... lol but it sounds like a great story!
Redpen clover In all honesty, as long as you don't end it lazily it should be alright to end on a cliffhanger. You just need to be careful on how you word it.
