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I forgot that in the narrative the theatre was empty, i wrote one in the full theatre

Illiman Ndiaye

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I don't think that's a big fuss. The markers are usually lenient.

Illiman Ndiaye

clover

Nah, not really. I did the tests today off pure ability ngl. I'm a bit of a sweat so JAC didn't assist me at all.

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Illiman Ndiaye
ikr, I honestly a little mad as i was literally cramming thousands of formulas, parabolas, quadratic equation and stuff and NOTHING like that even came up!!

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Illiman Ndiaye
thats a big relief, i am just happy i managed to finish it in time

MMHS

PotatoSinghThe3rd same i wrote about whispers except t was a guy watching ghostbusters and some other sht but yeah i tried to make it rlly emotive and evocative

Illiman Ndiaye

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I heard lots of my friends talking down JAC and Hendersons. they go to some tutor called Select Entry Accelerator.
they claimed that all the JAC content is outdated asf, and the contents on the exam werent gonna be close to it. turns out they were right

Miio

Hopefully macrob accepts high averages because I’m not getting anymore than that 😭

clover

the persuasive though! i didnt know if you were meant to talk about the people (Sam and someone else?) in the essay... i just said "Do people go to the cinemas as much as they used to?" and I said it wasn't...

Ronaldo

clover uhm u really fd up there bc u had to choose who’s side u were on and state why

tuliplover

clover I supported nova's side that was the girl name

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What was everyone's stance for persuasive?
mine was yes, cinemas are good

Illiman Ndiaye

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I wrote against. My reasons were:

As we embark into a new digital age, streaming services become more readily available
The expenses of movie cinemas in contrast to its alternatives is far greater

Rebuttal: "Movie cinemas provide many benefits and luxuries"
I wrote about how this motion is correct but does not negate the fact that these luxuries are present when streaming movies

Illiman Ndiaye

clover

i wrote in first person about a lab experiment monster coming alive and massacring everybody around the girl. i didnt have much time so i just did a cliffhanger and filled with a shit ton of imagery. now that i look back at it half of it didn't make sense. eg "his eyes were jet-black: devoid of compassion"

clover

Illiman Ndiaye i feel like if you have a lot of description that's really good because like imo i didn't focus too much on describing sadly

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Illiman Ndiaye
I wrote that tentacles erupted from the screen (nobody else except for the person can see it) and swallowed the person whole and transported her into a jet black place where all the walls started closing in and that person started suffocating, i was running out of time so then i just wrote that she got sucked out of the place and back into the cinema and wondered if it was all just a hallucination, after that i ended in a cliff hanger..

clover

Ronaldo yea i get where you're coming from. let me explain what i did - i said people don't go to the cinema for various reasons - a) because there's other options b) because it's expensive, then the rebuttal stated that cinemas are more immersive, but there's other options like VR and stuff. i didnt explicitly state whose side i was on but i implied it. i hope i didnt mess it up 😭

MMHS

Ronaldo its not a persuasive piece if you state "i agree with nova" that's a analytical, persuasive pieces NEVER use personal pronouns, you are meant to just write a persuasive piece on which side of the story you support, bc you can say something like "I prefer novas idea". So i think clover is fine

Illiman Ndiaye

clover

My jac teacher says my imagery is too much and too hard to understand 🙁

Ronaldo

Illiman Ndiaye I wrote for cinemas were bad and my reasons were
1- The expense issue for the average customer
2- the inconvenience of location, prices and comfort ability
3- why no people decide to attend cinemas
Rebuttal- cinemas can abolish the average customers budget
It was better wording than what I just said

MMHS

Illiman Ndiaye i wrote against as well:
I wrote about the ever prevalent cost of living issues that envelop our society, thus it wouldn't be sage to keep spending so much on movie tickets, and also i took upon a more personal tone by addressing and stating things like, "Wouldn't you want to be able to stream movies in the coziness of your own home" (not the exact words but similar idea pretty much), then i rebutted saying that for our youth, its wise to take them out for a occasional cinema trip so that they don't just die out and they are able to make more memories kinda.

clover

MMHS Oh phew, thank goodness

clover

Illiman Ndiaye really? my teachers always told me to "add more description and examples" even though i had one for every paragraph

MMHS

Ronaldo wait how is that a rebuttal, thats literally a statement for. Abolish a budget just supports your first argument

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