Also istg ive been thinking more about my creative piece now, like ik my persuasive piece was pretty good but creative although was 'good' ig, idk if my actual ideas and storyline will be good enough. I wrote about a person, who was seemingly watching a ghostbusters movie, and allis going great then suddenly eerie voices fill the cinema, reminiscent of that of ghosts, later on the keep flying past her, uttering malevolent words (i cant remember them now lol), the lights flicker on and off, this is when she realises it isn't a normal cinema experience and tries to free herself, but she find herself entrapped to the arm rests. The ghosts take over the cinema, and let her free, only then to rise her up high into the balcony, onto the chandelier edge and place her there. She wakes up, oblivious to her surroundings, but realises the movie is still playing, its nearing its end though something strange is happening with the movie, it turns out its not the good guys chasing and catching ghosts but rather the opposite. This is where i ended it off with "she realised there was no escape, no happy ending, just a simulation that she would be stuck in, forever...
