if ur tutor wrote that then its kinda low quality ngl, kinda abrupt, not flowy sentences, vocab is also of a mediocre quality
Any feedback?
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- MMHS nah it was mine and reading back ik i have to fix it up js is js putting ideas down
.. nooooo i did it our prompt is to persuade and we have to write a short synopsis at the start
MMHS ty though thats rlly helpful
MMHS its cuz I’m not used to essay writing since i haven’t done one in a while
MMHS ty for the feedback tho
The Outsiders is a fictional novel written about the conflict between two gangs, The Socs (which is slang for Socials) and the Greasers (the name symbolises their greasy hair). As the book goes on, the protagonist, Ponyboy unravels the true personality of many of his foes. Ponyboy lives with his two brothers, Darry and Sodapop. The 3 lost their parents passed away in a car crash a couple of years before the story was set, taking a detrimental impact on their lives, but primarily Ponyboy. This distraction caused his grades to plummet, and to be involved in fights that could put his life at risk.
Dally and Johnny are two of their closest friends and are also a part of the Greasers. Ponyboy, being the youngest in the group was also the most petulant. An example of his childish behaviours are him reaching home after 12am and picking up the Soc’s girls which was clearly an immature choice.
Soon after, Ponyboy and Johnny pick up two of the Soc’s girls at the drive in theater, infuriating two of the Soc’s, Bob and Randy. These four shortly had a second encounter at the park, where Ponyboy was being drowned by the two boys. Johnny couldn’t just watch his friend die in front of his own eyes, so he grabbed his switchblade which he swore he would only use for self-defence and stabbed Bob. The rest of them ran off. Johnny was officially a criminal. His name made newspaper headlines, causing the town to believe he was a miscreant who wanted unnecessary attention. They ran over to Dally’s house where they grabbed essential items and ran off to a rural, old church.
@MMHS any better?
maybe do (symbolic of their greasy hair), and for The socs, it could be (a colloquial for Socials)
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NHSSWEATALT ohhh that's rally good but if I do have a suggestion for later its that talk about the themes of the book. Yk, belonging, identity and all that stuff (for the part where u convince someone to read it)
aru ye good idea
MMHS how colloquial though it doesnt fit
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The Outsiders is a fictional novel written about the conflict between two gangs, The Socs (which is slang for Socials) and the Greasers. The stereotype revolving around the greasers are that they are lower-class members and are deprived of fancy cars, clothes, and food while the Socs are known for their posh lifestyle, wealthy families, and complacent personalities towards others. The name the Greasers is symbolic of the Greaser’s hair. This book is written from the point of view of the protagonist, Ponyboy, who lives with his two brothers, Darry and Sodapop alone due to the passing of their parents. The death of their parents had a detrimental impact on their lives, but primarily Ponyboy. This distraction caused his grades to plummet, and to be involved in fights that could put his life at risk. Dally and Johnny are two of their closest friends and are also a part of the Greasers. Soon after, Ponyboy and Johnny pick up two of the Soc’s girls at the drive in theater, infuriating two of the Soc’s, Bob and Randy. These four shortly had a second encounter at the park, where Ponyboy was being drowned by the two boys, Johnny couldn’t just watch his friend die in front of his own eyes, so he grabbed his switchblade and stabbed Bob. The rest of them ran off. Johnny was officially a criminal. This caused his name to surface. A plethora of news reports were written causing the town to believe he was a miscreant who wanted unnecessary attention. They ran over to Dally’s house where they grabbed essential items and ran off to a rural, old church.
This book would be appealing to anyone who finds interest in friendships and drama as there is frequent conflict between the two groups. Coming from someone who hates reading, this is a book that was given three weeks to read from school, that I finished in one. As Ponyboy is 14, I find it interesting to compare our lives, how he copes without parents and more. Anyone in high school would likely be able to relate and understand how hard it must be to be living without a proper guardian.
Many hidden meanings are disguised throughout the book. On the front cover, there are 4 combs with one being a different colour to the others. This signifies The Outsider. Which in the end, after Johnny dies while saving kids from a church fire they caused, which also cleared his name and he died a hero, and Dally getting shot by the cops after having a mental breakdown and robbing a grocery store, leaving Ponyboy the only friend left standing.
As the book goes on, Ponyboy continues to unravel the true identities of many of the people he knows, even finding out Randy’s true innocent personality later in the text. But in the end, the book gleams the spotlight on the epicenter of the novel, the death of one of the lower-class members, Johnny. The story steadily declined from here, soon losing one of his friends and entering a state of utter depression.
so this isn't an essay right? It just seems like a book review
MMHS yeah it is pretty much
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