guys is this good? I took a lot of time in the planning.
“According to the map, something should be here, but all I saw was a thick, grey concrete wall.”
I looked around desperately to find refuge. It all started on a normal rainy weekday, I was coming back from school and found a very old map. Opening the map, I found that it was a map of the suburb in which I lived, but then when I looked deeper into the map, I realized that something was obscure about the map, there was a narrow passway very close to where I lived. The number of times I had gone that way, I knew that the passway was blocked way before I came to live in this suburb, but then on the map there was a date which was 2 years ago, so how was that possible.
I followed what the map said and reached the end of the narrow road. According to the map, this was not the end of the road, but all I saw was a thick, grey and old concrete wall. I was trying to knock on the wall but then suddenly part of the wall pushed open like a door opening, so I wanted to discover the truth so I went in. Well, at this moment you might think why did I go in, but I thought that as a fourteen year old boy, I had the skill to detect that something was wrong and my mind was filled with curiosity that the danger was out of my mind.
I continued walking along the narrow road, the strong force of wind, the refreshing scent of petrichor from the rain went through my nostrils. I was so good, I felt as though I was in a new life. The chirping of birds and the steady rhythm of my canvas shoes were the only sound piercing the silence.
Suddenly, my foot got caught in a net and I fell hard on the concrete floor. Hot, crimson blood gushed out of my wound, I tried to run, but groaned and collapsed. A few feet away was something, it was big and red, it was a BOMB! “Help!” I screamed, but it made no difference. Why? Why was I so foolhardy? Why was my mind filled with curiosity and hope of finding something really good?
Suddenly, near the door, I heard a few footsteps. Surely, someone might have heard my screams. I looked but in hope but gasped as I saw four men in suits pointing their black guns right on my face. It was a trap!
