my essays went from this:
WHY SHOULD EVERY HOUSE HAVE A GARDEN? A Garden is useful because it helps us
to grow organic and healthy food that can make you stronger, more active and helps you to
grow taller. The three important things of having a Garden is you should water your plants
regularly, because if you don’t water properly your plants will be ruined and even burnt.
Also, while watering the plants, we equally divide the space, so that we can be fair and don’t
pour too much water as it gets drowned. Second thing whenever we want to make a garden
we need to find the space so that we can check where we can plant and not planting
randomly. So that’s why we should use the amount of space needed, and not too little or not
too much.
Moreover, A Garden should be equally distributed so that we can grow fresh organic
vegetables, Fruits and flowers. Third important point is that we should be responsible with
the seeds and this is one of the main things to make your garden nice, clean and clear.
Seeds are a main point that plants are created. It helps you build a nice garden.
If you don’t eat organic or fresh food you won’t get stronger, active and taller. The benefit of
eating healthy food is we will not have any health problems and it will help your body be
motivated and will reduce your fat; It even helps your brain to be more active, So that it can
be sharp and quick.
It is clear that we should have a Garden, So that we can have organic plants and fresh food
from your garden .Activeness helps you being active while there is sun and when you are
tired. You can get stronger by eating your healthy fruits/vegetables. In a Garden We should
always plant seeds because that’s how you can get a beautiful garden.
The above is the first essay I wrote in my first shaam class.
To a better and higher standards.