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BallOfYarn

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  • Hi! I graduated in 2024 with an ATAR of 99.4 and a raw 45 in English. In Year 10, I was an average English student, but by Year 12, I was consistently scoring near full marks on my English SACs. The key? Exposure to high-scoring essays and understanding exactly what set them apart.
    To help others improve their writing, I’m selling some of my own VCE essays:
    Argument Analysis
    ⭐ Consistently graded 18-20/20 by current VCAA and VCAA-aligned assessors
    πŸ“Œ Includes:
    6 Full Argument Analysis Essays
    Tips & Tricks for Argument Analysis
    Passage excerpts
    πŸ’° Price: $20

    Text Responses
    πŸ“– False Claims of Colonial Thieves
    3 Essays, graded 19/20
    7 page comprehensive poem analysis
    Price: $15
    πŸ“– Much Ado About Nothing (No longer on the VCE text list – discounted!)
    4 Essays, graded 18-20/20
    Price: $10

    Crafting Texts
    Framework: Personal Journey
    3 Texts:

    • Ted Talk (19/20)
    • Personal story (19/20)
    • Creative story (20/20)
      Including reflective commentary for the Ted Talk and Personal Story
      Price: $20
      πŸ“Œ Bundle Discounts Available – Let me know if you’re after a specific selection!
      πŸ“© If interested, email: saishasharma44@gmail.com