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Here is how I go about writing comparative essays:

1. Choose 2 themes that are really prominent in both texts. Brainstorm some quotes/ filmic techniques that relate to these two themes.
2. Introduction will introduce the two texts, maybe give some context (i.e. say why these themes were relevant at the time of writing, also comment of the universality of those themes which is why the appropriated text is also relevant). Introduction should also briefly mention the two themes you will be discussing.
3. Paragraph one will focus on the first theme. Opening sentence should comment on what the authors of the two texts are trying to convey through these themes. Then provide evidence (quote, camera angle, mis en scene etc...) from the main text and discuss what the meaning behind it is. Repeat for the second text. Concluding paragraph should directly answer question, perhaps even using the same words as in the question
4. Repeat step 3 with the second theme
5. Conclusion should summarise what you have said in your essay without introducing any new ideas

hope that helps and let me know if you need clarification on anything i have said.

It all depends on your school I would say. Your HSC marks for each subject are calculated by taking your raw HSC mark in the exam and averaging that out with the mark that your rank got (so for example, in English Advanced the 21st best mark). This is done for each subject and all those marks are averaged out for your ATAR.

That being said your ATAR is largely undetermined yet. Do you think that the 21st mark in English will be 75-80? Completely depends on the capabilities of your peers and how well they are going to go. It sounds like you go to a fairly academic school given that you have a fairly low rank with high overall marks. It is definitely still worth trying in the HSC and I actually do think you can get an 80+ atar if you really try. Good luck and I hope that answers your question.

I have been compiling a list of central metaphors which I can use for English Advanced HSC Module C 'The Craft of Writing" which I can use for imaginative, discursive and persuasive writing. If people can add to my list of themes and metaphors that would be great!!
Themes
-Freedom
-Non-conformity
-Feminism
-Risk taking

Central Metaphors

• House which reveals as story as the persona walks through it
• Light representing a persons emotions

thanks so much