Interesting answer! You did made some good key points, such as mentioning Memory B cells arising from the primary response. However note that you repeated some information in your answer:
"The body already contains Memory B cells from your previous infection..."
"...as the body develops memory B cells for the pathogen during the primary immune response."
It won't make you lose marks but it will waste writing space and time in tests.
Also you specified IgG antibodies? To be honest I am not sure myself whether this is the only isotype of antibodies produced by Plasma cells differentiated from Memory B cells, but I would assume that isn't the case. So again, best off not mentioning it as it could invalidate your answer.