Howzitt peeps!!
I need help for my history essay structure for my first sac because im pretty clueless but it would be nice to gain some insight from other students (past or present)

My exemplar topic is : From 1870 to 1919 Germany stepped from worldwide dominance into a doomed state. Discuss.

Also heres a bit of an intro i just wrote ( its not very good)

The First World War was a catastrophic period in history, noted for the havoc it reigned for numerous countries involved. Out of all these nations, it was Germany who experienced a notorious downfall. The native citizens at the time were exposed to staggering amounts of political uncertainty, scarcity of daily necessities and a broken economy because of post-war hardships. Amongst global standards, Germany had lost major assets and entered a state of humiliation after 1918. Not only did this impact the reputation and state of the country, but also erased the purpose of the German Unification. and all efforts invested in the years before World War One. Ultimately, what was once an expansive and wealthy empire, became ravishingly poor and unstable as it declined from global dominance to a failed state.

tell me what you think/how can i improve??
thank youuu

    2 months later

    aved do not listen to the below reply for buying an essay, most are pre-written and will be detected if teachers use a plagiarism checker + every teacher knows a students writing style, so it would be extremely obvious if they are writing and a much higher level than previously (not to say they can't improve drastically) but within such a short period too

      18 days later

      yohannathomas
      With kindness, can you please stop referring this as it promotes plagiarism which is clearly not what this discussion is for.. I hoped i could get some clarity from other history students but its really annoying when you spam this. I have flagged you once and will delete this discussion by any means if this continues.

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