MMHS this is js a synopsis but in later paragraphs im meant to persuade my tutor to read the book
Any feedback?
@".."#p48794 i couldnt finish cuz we have a goddamn 4 minute speech limit lol
YR10SEHSASPIRANT . "The main character, ponyboy, unravels the systemic problems of the Socs and Greasers laced within the world of "The Outsiders", forcing himself to run away from the authorities to maintain his friendships and keep his family together without his parents. Throughout this action filled drama: tragedies, conflicts, and friendships sprout. With the epicenter of this novel revolving around a death at the hand of the lower class member Johnny, Ponyboy's friend."
This is just a couple of sentences I came up with about it if you are trying to convince your tutor. Not really helpful for a synopsis though. Might have waffled 
.. tyyyy still is useful
YR10SEHSASPIRANT ohhhhhh, just say the point of the novel, not really each individual event.
YR10SEHSASPIRANT ok, ty.
.. wth ur writing is so good
.. but my tutor wrote this. and a short summary of character and plot development
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fun fact: i almost cried reading that book (if you haven't noticed already, I'm a weirdo)
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Tas the book was so good though
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YR10SEHSASPIRANT Well it's not bad(more tailored towards essays) BUT you have FOUR BLOODY MINUTES to get your point across about the novel and present. So I think instead of already spoiling the events of the novel just highlighting the main point of what the author wanted to convey. It would be more convincing to read the novel in my opinion(just an opinion, remember always your choice)
.. wait i don’t understand for the audience to read the novel? Bc if thats the case i dont think it would work as she has clearly stated to explain the story
YR10SEHSASPIRANT Wait what I'm so confused, earlier you said, " this is js a synopsis but in later paragraphs im meant to persuade my tutor to read the book" So I thought you meant the prompt was to convince people to read the book. Mb if I interpreted wrong. Also if your tutor did that, why did they only do half of the story?
if ur tutor wrote that then its kinda low quality ngl, kinda abrupt, not flowy sentences, vocab is also of a mediocre quality
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- MMHS nah it was mine and reading back ik i have to fix it up js is js putting ideas down
.. nooooo i did it our prompt is to persuade and we have to write a short synopsis at the start
MMHS ty though thats rlly helpful
MMHS its cuz I’m not used to essay writing since i haven’t done one in a while
MMHS ty for the feedback tho