Ronaldo Good structure, however in your intro do sign-posting (state your arguments) and all of your arguments are still leading to carbon emmisions except for the last one so try make them lead to different arguments
Also begin your bp's with paragraphs starters such as "To begin with" or "First of all" or Additionally like your last one. With the conclusion begin it with "In conclusion" or "To conclude" or "To sum up"
Victorian selective school
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Ronaldo Like maybe 75-80% but try to fix your mistakes (watch yt vids about how to improve)
TryingForMHS Actually you don't need to add that much vocab, however try to make it more formal
TryingForMHS so instead of shouldn't wouldn't and couldn't i use should not would not and could not
Ronaldo Does anybody actually know the new system for grading.
Ronaldo Not like that
AverageMultiChoiceTest i believe its the acer method where you get marked on a scale but if you really want to know search acer scoring method
TryingForMHS so how should i make it formal
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AverageMultiChoiceTest they mark your tests and basically rank you amongst everyone else taking the test. so basically if you get 20/60 but everyone else gets 9/60 you get a superior lol
Edit: they rank you using: superior, high average, above average, average, below average
Ronaldo Like try not to use too much 'I's only use it if the topic is asking you about your opinion. And make it like its an essay, not like you're saying it to someone
applejuice27 Do they mark based on ur school preference or just compared to everyone?
Miio I think just your school
MMHS Ye like rn im focussing on Nr and Vr and a bit of Math because I'm dumb compared to you in Math even though I get A+'s
Ronaldo
also the whole feminine and masculinity thing is unnecessary for me, only choose things that add meaning to your piece. That is what i do for my English essays, because if you have a technique that is evident like onomatopoeia or smth, don't mention that bc its a technique but choose the ones that add value to your piece
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TryingForMHS
Idk if im that good compared to you? Do you have any other practice tests that i could do to perhaps help each other on things you find hard to do under time constraint?
MMHS I only find the deroza ones challenging the rest are easy, because once you sent those and I found it challenging and the rest of you guys said it was easy and got like 55/60 while i got like 51/60 I got nervous
TryingForMHS thank u
so the school u preferenced.
MMHS Yeah like onomateopoeia doesn't really give definition to persuasive essays and doesn't help it. And the feminine and masculinity thing I don't understand it