Dosanjh (NHS) whenever i come in contact (skin) with a carpet, it feels like the pandoras mystery box has been opened, like what germs or diseases will it transmit to me, I'm js hella sensitive towards carpets 😔

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    dont stay up too late also, get good sleep, im gonna hop off now, gn peeps

      hello guys i struggle mostly with writing and i didnt get in last yr trying for yr 10 entry and idk if this makes sense but what is the quality of writing that would recieve a superior. Like does anyone have any pieces of writing that were the same quality that would get a superior? i just need a rough estimate of what the quality should be like

        • din

          • Post #3103

          Sierra yes me too my writing sucks, but my friend whos a really good writer said to read a lot and it will help improve writing

            • MMMHS

              • Post #3104

              Sierra lol i got a sup for writing but i don't have any of my pieces on me sorry. The main thing is that your story flows well and captivates your reader

                i suck at writing 🙁

                i could possibly write an essay if any of you would like a demonstration on a good scoring essay, js gotta find a suitable time to do so, or i probably wont (if i dont have enough time)

                  • MMMHS

                    • Post #3113

                    Dosanjh (NHS) you don't know that for sure unless you actually get a superior on the test so...

                      • din

                        • Post #3114

                        asianasen yes pls, i need example essays cos my writings so bad and i have to improve it but idk how

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                              • Post #3115

                              din can u do a practice piece then send it online? I know its gonna be a hassle copying what u wrote on paper to typing it on Atarnotes but we wanna see what the true problem is. Or you can go to your teachers or parents and ask what they found weird about your writing.

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                                    MMHS no one can say if there good or not unless they have done the test and got a good score for example someone like you could say he is good at writing and @Dosanjh (NHS) you also said dont get overconfident remember???