clover
I wrote that cinemas are good

  1. provide stress relief from academic pressure
  2. great way of entertaining and making fun-loving memories
  3. rebuttal:- some may argue that research shows that in 2021 not many people came to the cinema
    I then stated that it was because of pandemic and health issues and further the evidence shows that there was a quick come back after 2021
    Something like that...

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      • Post #164

      clover

      I end all my narrative essays with a cliffhanger. I think in all my time at JAC I've only ended a narrative without a cliffhanger once. And that was because the prompt was some obscure topic

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        I'm probably not a good person to judge your work but wouldn't your first motion be neglecting of streaming services? Couldn't students stream movies in the comfort of their own homes - which would provide more stress relief from academic pressure?

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            ye ig but when i had already written my whole introduction was when i realised that i should have gone against, but obv i didn't cut it because 1 time 2 neatness 3 space for writing
            so yeah, i needed to bear with the stance that i chose.....

              i went super overboard with the persuasive and stuffed up my narrative writing time 😅

              :): yeah bc from 2019 onwards their was an increase in the aspect of expense and versatility obviously due to our growing "technologically based" era

                [deleted] same here, like using pathos for that and i used it for the comfort of your own home, sort of like a appeal to audience

                  i was extremely surprised that they didnt ask any english lang related questions like what type of poem is this or what literary device was used here

                  YR10SEHSASPIRANT same tho bc everything for maths I learnt fell down the drain I think the ppl over prepare and the smart kids who know the obvious stuff get in bc they already know it

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                      Ronaldo just so useless stressing over learning parabolas, like I'm actually rlly mad