clover Illiman Ndiaye i tried doing like super descriptive this one time, didnt even get upto the plot twist in the 20 minutes...
Illiman Ndiaye clover I end all my narrative essays with a cliffhanger. I think in all my time at JAC I've only ended a narrative without a cliffhanger once. And that was because the prompt was some obscure topic
Illiman Ndiaye MMHS What the sigma, me too. I talked about the cost of living issues and I used pathos like, "As the cost of living crisis further takes a toll on our lifestyles, it has become clear that many families cannot afford this luxury"
MMHS Illiman Ndiaye same here, like using pathos for that and i used it for the comfort of your own home, sort of like a appeal to audience
:): clover I wrote that cinemas are good provide stress relief from academic pressure great way of entertaining and making fun-loving memories rebuttal:- some may argue that research shows that in 2021 not many people came to the cinema I then stated that it was because of pandemic and health issues and further the evidence shows that there was a quick come back after 2021 Something like that...
Illiman Ndiaye :): I'm probably not a good person to judge your work but wouldn't your first motion be neglecting of streaming services? Couldn't students stream movies in the comfort of their own homes - which would provide more stress relief from academic pressure?
MMHS :): yeah bc from 2019 onwards their was an increase in the aspect of expense and versatility obviously due to our growing "technologically based" era
:): Illiman Ndiaye ye ig but when i had already written my whole introduction was when i realised that i should have gone against, but obv i didn't cut it because 1 time 2 neatness 3 space for writing so yeah, i needed to bear with the stance that i chose.....
MMHS i was extremely surprised that they didnt ask any english lang related questions like what type of poem is this or what literary device was used here
Ronaldo NOSSALSUCCESSBUTNOTGOING same tho bc everything for maths I learnt fell down the drain I think the ppl over prepare and the smart kids who know the obvious stuff get in bc they already know it
MMHS Ronaldo nah you wouldn't have he was at moonee valley, i saw him, he's my mate so he told me he was main lounge
