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I probably overdid my descriptions. Like I'd have a whole ass paragraph about my character's emotions. And then it'd be really rushed towards the end when I'm wrapping it up
I probably overdid my descriptions. Like I'd have a whole ass paragraph about my character's emotions. And then it'd be really rushed towards the end when I'm wrapping it up
What the sigma, me too. I talked about the cost of living issues and I used pathos like, "As the cost of living crisis further takes a toll on our lifestyles, it has become clear that many families cannot afford this luxury"
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I wrote that cinemas are good
I end all my narrative essays with a cliffhanger. I think in all my time at JAC I've only ended a narrative without a cliffhanger once. And that was because the prompt was some obscure topic
I'm probably not a good person to judge your work but wouldn't your first motion be neglecting of streaming services? Couldn't students stream movies in the comfort of their own homes - which would provide more stress relief from academic pressure?
i went super overboard with the persuasive and stuffed up my narrative writing time
YR10SEHSASPIRANT nicee
i was extremely surprised that they didnt ask any english lang related questions like what type of poem is this or what literary device was used here
MMHS i feel so weird i feel like i did bad and good at the same time
YR10SEHSASPIRANT same here, i guess ambivalent?
MMHS yeahh
YR10SEHSASPIRANT same tho bc everything for maths I learnt fell down the drain I think the ppl over prepare and the smart kids who know the obvious stuff get in bc they already know it