MMHS Ronaldo no but she was expressing concern saying that people do get mistakes, but not for that type of question
PotatoSinghThe3rd MMHS Don't worry, I messed up too. I'm not sure whether I put exasperated or not.. I put disappointed... i think. Look, i was IN A HURRY. I can't wait for my results though
tuliplover PotatoSinghThe3rd for me I wrote about this girl who is a cleaner in the cinema and she heard sounds and what not then she found a child and called the police but it was all in her head
clover tuliplover really good story! i just think maybe at the end try not to put a cliffhanger/ "its a dream" sort of thing because my teachers always tell me not to... lol but it sounds like a great story!
Redpen clover In all honesty, as long as you don't end it lazily it should be alright to end on a cliffhanger. You just need to be careful on how you word it.
clover I feel like having a written prompt would have been nicer; we were all practicing so much for those!
ZarraorTheDinosaur I was the guy in the big tie dye green/white hoodie eating this REALLY crumbly brownie. Also, the teacher was exasperated because you could see it on her face.
Ronaldo ZarraorTheDinosaur no Bec if it was exasperated the grammar wouldn’t have been like that also by the look on her face u can tell it was concerned or disappointed
