chxin Damn, u spent all this time writing that!! that is actually pretty good! Is this part of the 1 word story? If it then ill continue.

    chxin However, it was about a hungry man eating KFC. The crunchy taste of chicken nuggets danced on his tongue, bringing him images of alienated objects, opening portals of his lifetime conspiracy, eradicating him from existence as his sole purpose had been fulfilled and the world he knew was going to turn into an army of possessed beings called forth by the dominant and prevalent alienated species. This very thought infuriated the man and caused him to hate chicken nuggets forever...

        MHS successful candidate What he should have done however was to take notice of the "illusion" as whatever the chicken nuggets have showcased him wasn't a mere illusion, but a vision. The simultaneous existences of reality and imagination were future victims of chaos and disorder. The duality of existences will merge to become one, nefarious-controlled existence. All this ruthless destruction would happen all because of one man and his disbelief in the chicken nuggets.

          MHS successful candidate The cow, flaunting a corpulent guise, started to smile. It soon bore a grin fraught with despair. Utter doom. As if portending something bad would happen. The brooding cobalt sky flashed a scintillating white before the I realised what the cow meant.

          A barrage of lightning rained down on the farm, the tumultuous roar of thunder reverberating throughout the cold, misty atmosphere. I looked behind me, at the cow, or rather, the charred, disfigured monstrosity that was once it. Not so impervious after all. Knowing I would meet the same fate if I tarried any longer, I took off, dodging strikes of lightning simultaneously. As I sprinted, I caught a glimpse of lush, verdant forest in the corner of my eye, and I soon figured I could only survive with the protection from those trees. So I scampered a bit faster, before a scream pierced my eardrum. My heart sank.

          I had left my dog behind.

              mhsbandar My eyes were a rhythm of up and down fluctuations, searching for the emaciated dog. Suddenly, I felt a forceful push against my spine. I fell face-flat on the rutted floor. My nose ached from intolerable pain caused by the sudden impact. I gasped as I found myself a victim of the unsettling lightning. What shocked me wasn't that I was right under a lightning bolt, but the thing that pushed me to it. I realised than that I didn't leave my dog behind, but that the dog left me behind...

                MHS successful candidate no its actually pretty good, u have an extensive vocab which is really helpful, and the suspense u build will be helpful in the exam. but the thing is some of the vocab u use does not make sense in the context, like the sentence "My eyes were a rhythm of up and down fluctuations" could be proofread and changed to "My eyes scanned my surroundings franctically" or something similar. U should practise writing narratives in 20 minutes on paper, just search for a prompt, start a timer and then write, and when you're done or the time is up review it, proofread it, see where u made mistakes and take note of them for next time