Victorian Selective Entry High Schools 2024 - Results!

chxin fr bro

Dosanjh (NHS) you don't know that for sure unless you actually get a superior on the test so...

asianasen yes pls, i need example essays cos my writings so bad and i have to improve it but idk how

din can u do a practice piece then send it online? I know its gonna be a hassle copying what u wrote on paper to typing it on Atarnotes but we wanna see what the true problem is. Or you can go to your teachers or parents and ask what they found weird about your writing.

asianasen yes please

MMHS no one can say if there good or not unless they have done the test and got a good score for example someone like you could say he is good at writing and @Dosanjh (NHS) you also said dont get overconfident remember???

chxin fr

din narrative or persuasive..? ill write the essays under timed conditions (20 mins) also

i might be able to pull up an old written essay also, idk, i js need a prompt

for the sehs exam, you need all rounded (good) scores, if you get all above averages and/or above, it is guaranteed for you to receive an offer, cuz writing and verbal is what they are looking for the most in the test, numerical also

asianasen they look most at the writing i think, if you do well in rc and vr it will reflect writing anyways, as long as you ace either the maths section or english section, then the other section you do better than average, you probably should receive an offer

but just do good and you get in trust

chxin Sry I didn't mean to glaze

chxin NOOO ALREADY

Dosanjh (NHS) alg

MMHS wait damn i didn’t know writing was the most important part

asianasen creative plss

.. ok ill send one of my old pieces in

ok so its lowk rlly bad so pls dont judge, i js need feedback, the prompt was a girl sitting on a chair and looking at a computer.
“Game over! Seriously! Again?” thought Ami furiously. She had been clicking the same few buttons for the past few hours and she kept hearing the same robotic voice at the end of it.

Ami dawdled downstairs to get some water, when her mum appeared out of nowhere. “Ami, do your chores!” She yelled. “Later.” Ami mumbled back. “Watch that attitude!” her mum screamed back in reply. Ami ran out the front door in rage, when could she be an adult and make her own choices and before she knew it she was in a whole other world.

“Where am I?” Ami said, a tint of fear in her voice. “Welcome to Ghost Chasers: Grown Edition.” Spoke a mysterious voice “Heh, that’s not a thing.” Ami chuckled in reply. “Oh, yes it is, “ The voice replied in an eerie tone, “follow the purple trail along to the adult store.” Ami strolled along the path, her curiousity guiding her further into this mysterious place.

“Welcome to the adult store.” the voice startled her this time. Ami gazed around the place in awe. Everything she ever wanted was here. her favourite clothes, shoes, video games, everything! She grabbed at the first thing she saw and bought it with her credit card she mysteriously had in her pocket.

“I never want to leave!” Ami exclaimed with pure joy. She continued wandering down the trail and reached a club. Ami ran in excitement and sat at the bench, with every hint of fear assuaged by the music playing in the background. Ami got some fries from the ordering station. She was feeling the happiest she had felt in years, but it al came to a end, when a security guard escorted her out, apparently she ran out of credit.

Ami desperately wanted to go back to normal the second things begun to spin out of control.

After trying everything to escape this “adult word”, she realised she had to earn back the credit and get a job. This instantly made Ami grateful for everything she had, she realised she wasn’t ready to be an adult yet and she had finally made her peace with that.

Ami opened her eyes and she was in her house on her couch, she had never been more grateful to be home.

(its so bad now that i read over it again, so pls dont judge)